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09 March 2007 @ 07:32 pm
Fic: Soft, Sweet, Thick: Don/Charlie  
Title: Soft, Sweet, Thick
Fandom: Numb3rs
Characters: Don/Charlie
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 705
Warning: Incest
Challenge: [info]quoted20
Dedication: [info]schnaucl requested something sexy and sweet. Hope this is a nice break from all the angst I've been writing.
Summary: Charlie is turning 18 and visiting home from Princeton. Don is 23 and on break from Quantico.
Disclaimer: Not mine, don't want, only borrowing, just fun, no infringement intended
A/N: The Geena Davis movie referenced is The Long Kiss Goodnight, which references a book by Harold Robbins.
The quote:
"All the things I really like to do are either illegal, immoral, or fattening." - Alexander Woollcott




your tongue in my mouth... [i. illegal]
Their mouths meet slowly– long, drawn out kisses with gentle, tentative tongues. Don puts his hand on Charlie’s neck, his fingers below the hard bone of his jaw, thumb at the side of his mouth and caressing so softly, it feels like silk against Charlie’s skin.

Don breaks their kissing and brings the joint back to his mouth, sucking in the sweet, harsh smoke. He closes his eyes as he holds it in and passes to Charlie.

Charlie inhales a little and starts coughing, thick grey smoke puffing out from his mouth. Don pats Charlie on the back, a pointless move but with good intention, and he reaches for the beer on the coffee table and hands it to his brother. Charlie takes several long swallows and then grimaces.

God, that’s disgusting.
It’s beer. You’ll like it when you’re older.
I’ll be eighteen in a week.
Still a kid.
Shut up.


Don takes the joint from Charlie and sucks in another hit.

Should you really be getting high, Don?

He blows the smoke out in little rings and pokes his fingers through one, breaking the circle into tiny curls spreading out like Charlie’s hair.

Man, Quantico kicked my ass. I’ve got two months until I have to go back. I’m going to enjoy my time off.

Don looks back over at Charlie, and a sickly sweet smile spreads across his lips. He leans back into his brother, and their mouths meet again, his hand slipping between Charlie’s thighs.



...your name on my lips... [ii. immoral]
Charlie spreads his legs wider as Don pushes his fingers inside.

Jesus, you’re so tight.
Is it supposed to feel like that?
I don’t know. No one’s ever done it to me.
Do you even know what you’re doing?


Don twists his fingers and hits Charlie’s prostate, and Charlie keens, his body jolting against the soft cotton sheets of Don’s bed. He thrusts his fingers in and out; Charlie rocks his body against Don’s hand, eager for that feeling again – harder and deeper.

He pulls his fingers out, and Charlie whimpers at the loss, but then the slick head of Don’s cock is there to replace them. Don presses inside, twin moans escaping their lips.

It’s so hot inside you.
Go slow. It hurts.
I’m sorry, buddy.


Don’s teeth bite down on Charlie’s earlobe, the pain transferred, and Charlie cries out.

Heard about it in that Geena Davis movie. Supposed to help.
It was a Harold Robbins book.
God, Charlie, you feel so fucking good.


As Charlie relaxes, Don quickens his pace – hard, fast, deep, Charlie tight and hot on his thick cock – and he buries his face against Charlie’s neck, chests slick with beading sweat sliding against each other and Charlie’s cock trapped between their bodies and growing harder with the friction of Don’s body riding up and down his. It never felt this good with the other guys and definitely not with the girls, nothing that made him feel so complete, and Don knows it’s wrong but he can’t bring himself to care when Charlie is making him soar higher than he’d imagined possible.

C’mon, Charlie, I want to feel you come on me, want you to feel me come inside you. Make me come.

Charlie shouts Don’s name and jerks against him, hot come splashing between their bodies, and Don follows soon after, grunts muffled by his mouth against Charlie’s.



...your taste on my tongue [iii. fattening]
Don presses another truffle between Charlie’s lips. He bites down on soft milk chocolate, and thick vanilla crème liqueur fills his mouth.

It won’t get you drunk, stupid.

The sweetness is chased by Don’s tongue, tasting sugar and Charlie, melting chocolate on his tongue.

He drizzles fudge over Charlie’s cock and slowly licks it off.

Mmm, tastes so good.
The chocolate or my dick?
Shut up, Charlie.


Charlie looks down at his brother, his naked body muscled hard from baseball and now Quantico, and he sees the humor in Don’s eyes.

You shut up. And suck me.
Look at you. Eighteen for a few hours, and you already think you’re the man.


Don swallows him down, sucking off all the fudge and then pulling back to spread on more.

I think we’ll run out of chocolate before I get tired of sucking you off.
 
 
Current Location: the 612
Current Mood: optimistic
Current Music: House
 
 
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melissima: Eppes slick-puppy <lj user=pro_f_iler>[info]melissima on March 10th, 2007 01:52 am (UTC)
God. I think I love you. And [info]schnaucl. God. *shudders*

I'll be reading it again, (in my bunk.)
NV: [n3] charlie // g33k love[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 02:17 am (UTC)
Hee! Thank you. You'll have to be sure to let Cyn know how much you appreciate her little cuddly bunny. :D
rubynye: Chocolate chip[info]rubynye on March 10th, 2007 03:31 am (UTC)
Oh, this is just delicious.
NV[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 03:52 am (UTC)
Thank you!!
☠ Old Man Renkas* I'm old and I'm renqa: the pink-o-path[info]the1969 on March 10th, 2007 04:06 am (UTC)
Have I told you that I love you<3?
NV[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
I LOVE YOU MORE!! <3
Cynthia: Charlie Loved by midnighta[info]schnaucl on March 10th, 2007 07:49 am (UTC)
I definitely love it, thank you! The dialog is very well written, especially in the last section. It's playful and they sound like they're equals which I really like.
NV: [$$] hst // cigarette[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 08:07 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm so happy that you loved it. <3 And thanks for prompting me. :)
Cynthia[info]schnaucl on March 10th, 2007 08:54 am (UTC)
Hey, any time you need a prompt! ;)
andi: Don tongue porn[info]admiralandrea on March 10th, 2007 09:01 am (UTC)
I'll be in my bunk.
NV[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
Hee! Glad you liked it.
spikedluv: don&charlie_addicted_shantalanadevil[info]spikedluv on March 10th, 2007 02:42 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. God. *fans self* That was hot and beautiful. Oh, the imagery, and the mood. Yum.
NV: [$$] hst // cigarette[info]neur0vanity on March 10th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
*gives you ice water* Glad you liked! :D
Dira Sudis: Charlie - : ] by sophiesly[info]dsudis on March 11th, 2007 12:25 am (UTC)
I... I have no words. I make happy incoherent vowel sounds at you instead. Mmmmyeah.
NV: [n3] charlie // g33k love[info]neur0vanity on March 11th, 2007 01:13 am (UTC)
I rendered you speechless! *blushes* Thanks for your comment. :)
Jadis: BlueNile[info]m_jadis on February 2nd, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
"Look at you. Eighteen for a few hours, and you already think you’re the man."

Jesus! this sound exactly like him! Don I mean. VBG. Great job. verra hot.
Anita: Numb3rs Charlie and Don 01[info]toomuchfandom on April 19th, 2008 03:37 pm (UTC)
Wow.

That's hot.

Wow...

*fansself*

Well done! Absolutely love it:D
CDC: box of chocolates[info]c425cc33 on June 11th, 2008 04:06 am (UTC)
Thanks for unlocking this. Loved and printed for later too... Wonderful banter and I'm still ded from the hot. xxxooo Now, I've *got* to find some icons for this fandom!