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03 March 2007 @ 01:22 am
Fic: Make This Go On Forever: Don/Charlie/Amita  
Title: Make This Go On Forever
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing/Characters: Don/Charlie/Amita
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 804
Disclaimer: Not mine, don't want, only borrowing, just fun, no infringment intended.
A/N: 100% inspired by [info]sororcula -- this is for you, baby!


His lips and teeth and tongue are everywhere. He sucks on the tender skin of her thighs, making her tense and squirm, and then his tongue is back between her legs, light and teasing as if he hadn’t just been as rough as he was, and she knows he’s trying to get her to beg. He licks from the glistening, velveteen skin up to her clit, his dark eyes never losing contact with hers. His tongue twirls around her clit, and she’s on the edge, and then he slips two fingers inside, crooks them perfectly, presses hard, and bites down.

She doesn’t think she’s ever come so hard, Charlie’s name on her lips.

+++++++

He’s big, almost too big, and she winces as he pushes into her, and he asks between clenched teeth, “Shit, you’re not a…” He groans long and low when he gets deeper, and her body tightens, jerks up the bed in reaction to the pain. “…you’re not a virgin, right?”

She’s not a virgin, but it’s been so long, and he’s not like his brother, and he doesn’t wait for her answer before he’s pounding into her.

She claws at his back and grits her teeth, and he holds her tighter in response.

“Stay with me, Amita. You’re doing good, honey.”

His hand forces its way between their sweat-slicked bodies and finds her clit, stroking hard and time with his movements.

She doesn’t think she’s ever come so hard, Don’s name on her lips.

+++++++

Before she knows what she’s doing, she’s slipped her hands into her jeans, and her fingers are inside her, her thumb working her to the peak as she watches them from the doorway. Don fucks Charlie the same way he’s fucked her, hips hitting hard and skin slapping against skin and that slippery, smacking sound of lube, and Don’s got Charlie’s hips gripped so tight in his hands, pulling him back to meet each trust, and Charlie looks like he’s never felt – never imagined – anything that felt so good, his mouth wide open and bottom lip trembling as moans and groans and shouts escape.

“I swear to God, Chuck,” Don keeps his smooth pace so perfectly, she’d swear he was destined to be an orchestral maestro. “Nothing feels as good on my cock as your ass.”

She doesn’t think she’s ever come so hard, a scream choked down by the vice grip of strained vocal chords.

+++++++

It’s too much at once, and she can’t begin to process it. There are Don’s lube-slicked fingers prepping her for him and Charlie’s talented tongue eating her out to get her dripping wet for him, and she can’t believe that she’s about to do this. Some switch should be going off in her brain saying, “God damn it, girl; this is insane,” but Charlie’s fingers are hitting her spot, and Don’s got his tongue in her ass, and there’s no way something that feels so good could ever be wrong. It must be the same way that people swear off the delicious satisfaction of chocolate or the salty pleasure of potato chips because they’re supposed to be bad things. And while she’s terrified of this, she can’t imagine a place she’d rather be.

Don pushes inside her, and she lets out a high groan, and there’s Charlie below her, putting his hand on her face and directing her gaze to him and promising that it’ll be okay.

Don pulls her up, his chest pressed to her back, and he spreads his legs wider on the bed so he’s got enough leverage to thrust up into her ass, and there’s Charlie with one hand’s fingers dipping inside her pussy and the other stroking his cock.

Charlie’s eyes are wide and desperate and pleading, needing her to admit that this is okay, and it’s not okay, but she’ll swear to anything as long as they’ll make this last forever.

Charlie spreads her legs wider and finds the right position between them to slip his cock inside, and he’s hitting the perfect spot almost immediately, and then Don’s grabbing her under her ass and lifting her, and Charlie’s lifting her under her thighs just above her knees, and she’s got no other choice other than to wrap her legs around Charlie and let them pound into her. Two beautiful brothers fucking her so thoroughly that she’s seized by a moment of clarity and realizes that this is perfection, the way she could only dream of it feeling, and she’ll never be sated if she never has it again. This has to go on forever. The moment it ends will be the moment it slips from her fingers.

She knows she’s never come so hard, the name of all that is holy on her lips and begging for this to not be the end.
 
 
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rock'n'roll doesn't wear a watch: navi[info]sororcula on March 3rd, 2007 09:07 am (UTC)
Oh, God, baby, this still kills me. I added it to my memories so I can read it ALL the time. *moans*
NV: [n3] amita // math barbie[info]neur0vanity on March 3rd, 2007 07:29 pm (UTC)
It's all for you, honeypop!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEye[info]emmademarais on March 3rd, 2007 08:33 pm (UTC)
Okay...

Hot?

Yes.

Confusing?

Also yes.

I can't figure out the logistics based on what's given.

What position are they all in to make this sandwich work?
NV: [n3] charlie & amita[info]neur0vanity on March 4th, 2007 02:29 am (UTC)
In my mind, they were moving into all sorts of different positions, but it's basically variations of Don behind her and Charlie in front. I guess I left it ambiguous so it can be whatever you want. Or maybe it's just lazy writing, LOL. :)

Thanks for your comment.
gyen_gaoltosing: SEX: Reading Porn[info]gyen_gaoltosing on March 4th, 2007 03:14 am (UTC)
WOW! Two stories in 24 hours where two female characters engage in anal sex. These are interesting times on LJ. :D

I love how different the relationships are to each brother, even when they're having sex with the same woman. Do you know what I mean? The different dynamics have always been so compelling to me, and this was cool in that regard. And this fic is different from others that are out there because Don and Charlie are into Amita here, and not having sex with each other through her.

Very cool!
NV: [n3] charlie & amita[info]neur0vanity on March 4th, 2007 03:22 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! Previously, I would have written them having sex with each other through her, but I've warmed up to Amita, and now I really like her. I think she's beautiful and the kind of girl that attracts men both sexually and intellectually.

Two stories in 24 hours where two female characters engage in anal sex.

I think I missed the other one because nothing is coming to mind. Where is it?
gyen_gaoltosing: FOOD: Candy Lurve #1[info]gyen_gaoltosing on March 4th, 2007 03:34 am (UTC)
It's [info]elysium1996's on-going Don/Coop/Lia series:
http://community.livejournal.com/numb3rs_fic/144672.html
I haven't had a chance to read much of the series overall, but I read this newest bit yesterday.

I think she's beautiful and the kind of girl that attracts men both sexually and intellectually.
Ahhh, Amita. She's such a fuck bunny. :D But then, most characters end up in the fuck bunny camp when I'm done with them, *LOL*.
NV: [misc] cupcake[info]neur0vanity on March 4th, 2007 03:36 am (UTC)
Ah, thanks for the link. I've been meaning to catch up with where the series is at. I started reading it somewhere in the middle. Thanks for the link!

But then, most characters end up in the fuck bunny camp when I'm done with them, *LOL*.

You do have a way with slutifying characters, heehee. And we do so love you for it.

*eats your icon*
DarkEly: Tongue Don[info]elysium1996 on March 7th, 2007 01:40 pm (UTC)
OMG I got a fic rec!!!!!!!!!!

SHINY!!!!!!


thanks so much GYN!.

and NV this is so HOT!!!!!!

Amita is so beautiful and I love her with Charlie for the Geek Love but there is definite hoteness potential w/ DOn especially in S1 and the purple fic with David... oh yeah I can so see that....

DAMn You And GYn are 2 faboo writers!

and the fic is under my super secret idenity (yeah that's sarcasm)

[info]darkkevlar


Ok off to read the rest of your yummy fic NV and see your purty icons!

see even DOn enjjoys the fic... with that tongue of his

NV: [n3] amita // throw down[info]neur0vanity on March 7th, 2007 07:02 pm (UTC)
Amita is so damn pretty; it's just not fair. If I looked like her, I would be all over Charlie and Don. And David. And Colby. And probably Megan, too.

Don enjoys anything where his giant cock gets love. <3
PhilLeeGirl[info]philleegirl on March 7th, 2007 07:30 pm (UTC)
Um, okay, wow... I think this fic just melted the two inches of snow off the roof.... yeah, this is amazing. But, you know I love me a good threesome and this is an awesome threesome.
NV: [n3] eppescest // beers[info]neur0vanity on March 7th, 2007 07:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you! The snow needs to melt, anyway. *bg*
JAZZ HANDS!: Numb3rs: beautiful cast is <3[info]meletor_et_al on March 7th, 2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
sdopifndskjfg...



what?
NV: [n3] charlie & amita[info]neur0vanity on March 7th, 2007 11:17 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Dream sandwich.
JAZZ HANDS![info]meletor_et_al on March 7th, 2007 11:20 pm (UTC)
o___o uh-huh.
rubynye: I Will Not... (Justabi)[info]rubynye on March 8th, 2007 02:28 pm (UTC)
Great googli moogli. I am melted into a puddle on the floor.

(PS Yay Amita! She really is gorgeous, isn't she?)
NV: [n3] amita // math barbie[info]neur0vanity on March 8th, 2007 06:25 pm (UTC)
Yay for melty goodness!

Amita is so hot. I love her hair. I need to have her hair. If I had that hair, all the boys would love me.
paige is proposing violence against the monkey: amita smile[info]leda_speaks on March 19th, 2007 04:38 am (UTC)
Guh. :thinks: Yep, that's all I got: GUH.
NV: [n3] amita // love machine[info]neur0vanity on March 19th, 2007 04:39 am (UTC)
LOL. Rendered speechless! Thank you. :)